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Haunting eyes
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:20:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Staring at you those
haunting, alluring eyes staring right
back at me
Afraid to move , trembling in the eyes alluring
gaze
Searching through my mind an answer I search to find
Do those eyes see what is inside my twisted mind?
I desperately try to turn away to break
the stares, but I'm lost deep within those
alluring eyes
JENNA
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2004-01-20 02:20:12]
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Re: Haunting eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:00:43 AM AEST
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Good work, my friend!
peace, joy, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Haunting eyes
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:13:39 PM AEST
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| Wow... This was an interesting one. I think you told it pretty well. Can be nice and can be scary to be caught in someones eyes. |
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Re: Haunting eyes
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:14:19 AM AEST
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lovely, has a nice flow to it. great write
Arden |
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