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MOONLIT HATRED
Contributed by
Kittie
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:08:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Moonlight s.t.r.e.w.n a c r o s s her face
Raven hair a mess
Lips dripping red
Emerald eyes filled with rage
At the sight of them
She could contain herself no longer
Do you understand?
Can you comprehend?
Isn't it enough?
No not enough for the night
Not enough for eternity
Knowing what is to come
Dig yourself in deeper
Oh ignorant one
Her opaque eyes show you the truth
Don't you know what to s.e.e?
Didn't you know when to l.i.s.t.e.n?
Do you even care?
Come inside
For one l a s t t.a.s.t.e
Of a little ecstacy
And a little demise
The pain should be good for you
Maybe then you will learn
Maybe then you will see
Scream a few more m.o.m.e.n.t.s for me
I love to see you squirm
Do you think it should end this way?
Don't you realize you brought yourself here?
Does it even matter?
What a lovely forest
You should be happy to die here
Moonlit hatred
S h i n e s through the trees
The last image you s.e.e
S.h.i.m.m.e.r.i.n.g in your eyes
The only light left
Lustful human
Don't you see this is what was meant to be?
Can't you believe what has happened?
Do I even care?
Not really
Moonlit hatred
Has been your curse
And my delight
Copyright ©
Kittie
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2004-01-20 06:08:18]
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Re: MOONLIT HATRED
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by subnet_spider on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:55:28 AM AEST
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I could actually see the picture as I was reading this.
Good write!
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Re: MOONLIT HATRED
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:23:42 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful! ahh..
x_x_x |
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Re: MOONLIT HATRED
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:00:44 PM AEST
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| the imagery is remarkable... im in love with this piece... |
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Re: MOONLIT HATRED
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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| Very vivid. You have an odd interesting style. I like it. I don't understand when you do t.h.i.s or t/h/i/s... Ah well. Lol. Nice write. |
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Re: MOONLIT HATRED
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:15:19 PM AEST
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| ooooo... i like your poems... goodish... *off to read more* |
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