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Puzzling puzzles
Contributed by
karoody
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:44:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've seen this puzzle countless times
Yet I never seem to remember
Where the pieces go
Still I walk this road
Unaware of my destination
With aching memories at my feet
My soul is growing weary
It seems that the sun is always setting
While my strained smile fades a little
And i begin to realize
I am destined to a life of wandering
In search of the missing pieces
Copyright ©
karoody
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2004-01-20 07:44:39]
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Re: Puzzling puzzles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:36:58 PM AEST
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...seems so many of us are on the same path, searching......
may you find what you're looking for...
slan
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Re: Puzzling puzzles
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST
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| a poem so full of emotion, great images and so vivid, that feeling... arg, ...you'll have the pieces someday! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Puzzling puzzles
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by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:36:49 AM AEST
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| with such an ease..you could express your emotional feelings..shows your talent..excellent write. venkat |
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Re: Puzzling puzzles
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 09:24:59 AM AEST
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I absolutely love that title...well, and I love the entire poem. I love it when a poet can say so much, so powerfully, in such a short write. Even though this seems a bit forlorn just remember a lot of interesting and awesome things can happen while "wandering" through life. I sure am happy that you wandered back to YPDC and I have come to know you. Thank you for your kindness, thoughtfulness, and being you. Thank you for wandering a bit over this way. :-)
Take care and thank you for writing poetry that I can enjoy.
Tim
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