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Theophania
Contributed by
karoody
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:15:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Trapped in her world of darkness
She hates what the mirror shows her
Looking at herself in disgust
Saying that no one can love her
Because this is what she's heard most of her life
How I wish she could see what I see
Her kind personality is so beautiful
As she walks around smiling at the world
Unaware that her presence brings light to a room
She says she is uncomfortable in her own skin
I say she can't see the truth
And pray for a way to show her
The grace that she brings to the lives
Of the people fortunate of knowing her
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karoody
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2004-01-20 08:15:35]
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Re: Theophania
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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| She sounds so lovely in your poem. Hopefully she will realize that she is beautiful in your eyes. Your poem was great to read. Kie |
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Re: Theophania
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:09:28 AM AEST
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| aww! dear kara, lovely poem for your friend, i know youve certainly added much to my life with your own grace and beauty and am happy your in it!:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Theophania
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:52:46 AM AEST
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Hugs my dear girl..this is wonderfully written..
happy to read your poem.. venkat |
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Re: Theophania
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 09:15:55 AM AEST
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This poem is a perfect example of what I have been saying about you the short but wonderful time I have known you. That is that you are so thoughtful and so caring about other people and their feelings. What an amazing thing you have done here for your friend.
The grace that she brings to the lives
Of the people fortunate of knowing her
I really like that. Sounds like someone else I know. ;-) |
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