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Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Brakes that slam against us
Lock up to our face
We were doomed from the start
So out of comfort to this place
Tires that skid forever
The sparkling pavement that could
The flesh torn from our bodies
And the tears of families that would
You broke it apart
Drown yourself in your 9th drink
I'm sitting in this bed incapacitated
Blood that drains into the sink
Losing the smiles that faded to stars
Tears that flood our needs
You killed me with your addictions
Sitting in this bed again, my sadness feeds
Ruin your life on your own next time
Make sure you only destroy yourself
When your sitting in that box alone
I'll make sure my tears hit you, no one else
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Re: Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:33:11 PM AEST
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Well written, and I agree with you completely.
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Re: Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
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by jme on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:07:26 PM AEST
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| Great job. Well written. |
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Re: Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:11:30 PM AEST
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touching write here. I lost six friends in an accident at one time they were hit by a drunk driver all but one died on the scene it was one of the most devasting moments of my life. I was hit head on by a drunk driver two years later such a hard message to deliver but one thats needs to be said dont drink and drive!
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Re: Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:56:47 PM AEST
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| I've read many of your works and I absolutely love them! I can relate to your pain so well and you can express them completely and freely. You have a great gift of writing and I hope you continue! |
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Re: Drive Home Drunk And Gasp For Air
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:59:54 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I enjoyed it. Nicely done. |
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