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Feather Falling
Contributed by
crlepley
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:59:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Watching a feather fall from the sky
Wondering to ask lound why...
Hating the wanting to break down and cry
Hoping someday my heart and soul can fly...
Dreaming of the signs that end in a sigh
Blinded by the thought that everyone will die...
But knowing not to listen to thoughts of a lie
Always believing that i will stand by...
All along watching a feather fall from the sky
Wondering to ask aloud why...
Hating the wanting to cry
Hoping not alone i will survive...
Never again my hearing will listen to goodbye
The walls growing larger overtaking everything in your life...
Still the feather falls from the sky
But not wondering to yell aloud why...
Giving in to the wanting to cry
wishing nothing now but when you can die
To let your heart and soul always fly...
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2004-01-20 15:59:29]
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Re: Feather Falling
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:25:36 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was dreamy & imaginative.
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Re: Feather Falling
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:31:26 AM AEST
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| the rhyming scheme is good, but i don't understand this. is the feath you, or some one you've loved, or is i some thing different althogether? |
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