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DEATH OF A FRIENDSHIP, A FUNERAL FOR LOVE!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:07:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Engrossed with her beauty, And depth of her eyes, The warmth of her kisses, Her moans and her sighs.
The I love yous she gave me. How she felt in my arms. Her feminine voice, And how she flaunted her charms.
The touch of her hands, And the frost in her hair. The most beautiful creation, With clothes on or bare.
All this was mine, But she stole it away. There is no more us. 'Twas our funeral today!
DEDICATED T0: MARY JOY ARAGON
robertburns2@mac.com
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2004-01-20 16:07:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: DEATH OF A FRIENDSHIP, A FUNERAL FOR LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:17:20 PM AEST (User
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very sad indeed beautiful but sad almost bitter sweet.
michelle |
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Re: DEATH OF A FRIENDSHIP, A FUNERAL FOR LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by hawaii06 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:05:33 PM AEST (User
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a sad poem...yet writen very well..You have good talent..keep writing... |
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Re: DEATH OF A FRIENDSHIP, A FUNERAL FOR LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:24:35 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully sad & touching! Sorry for the loss.Christina |
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Re: DEATH OF A FRIENDSHIP, A FUNERAL FOR LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:50:28 PM AEST (User
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This was good. |
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