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The Betrayal
Contributed by
Elf
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You built me up
oh so high.
It felt as if
I could really fly.
You told me things
I wanted to hear.
To my very heart,
you became so near.
I thought it came from the heart,
Everything you said.
But how is that possible,
When your heart is so dead?
Because you let me fall
from the clouds so high.
I fell until
I thought I would die.
And close I came.
For I had begun to depend.
For anything, everything
To no end.
But the end did come.
I found you out.
And it broke my heart
with a single clout.
So heal I did
Till I was well.
Now I've come
here to tell.
To tell you just
How bad it hurt.
But now I stand
Whole and unhurt.
And one thing is left
That I've to say.
You'll get yours!
Somewhere someday!
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-01-20 17:04:12]
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Re: The Betrayal
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by norm on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:55:52 PM AEST
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Your poem is well written
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I like the fact you recovered well,
and to this person you did tell
to get lost and they'll get theirs
you didn't cry, but dispelled your cares |
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Re: The Betrayal
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:31:29 PM AEST
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Wow this was incredibly brilliant and well written. I could totally relate. I really really liked this.
'Because you let me fall
from the clouds so high.
I fell until
I thought I would die.'
That was incredible.
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