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Stolen innocence
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:03:20 PM in AEST
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A broken whisper
In time untold
A silent thought
In hearts so bold
Troubled thoughts
Shattered dreams
Stolen innocence
Raging screams
A daughter lost
My crying shame
Im her daddy
So im to blame
I could not protect
My princess true
Im sorry baby
Please I love you
Ill find the man
His soul ill steal
Ill hurt him so
To kill i will
Behind bars now baby
They sentenced me
But im just happy
..I set you free
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by JenimaeMalinaHaloisi on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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| That was sweet, you might not want to kill though. But nice thought. |
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by Empty_Soul on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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really nice poem dude, shows ur sensitive side and how soft u really are! lol.i would do exactly the same if i had a daughter an same happened, god the guy would wish he never been born if i got hold of him.
keep on fighting
never stop writing
john luv ya dude! HUGS!!!! haha |
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by fallen_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:32:23 PM AEST
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| As I already told you i love this poem. One of my fav's it has such much deep raw emotion. I think it prob really is how a father may react. love ur work always. T x |
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:48:23 AM AEST
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Geez what a poem! Its really good! Clear messege and good flow. the ending is really great!
Behind bars now baby
They sentenced me
But im just happy
..I set you free
...........Amazing. Keep it up!!
Anne :n) |
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by Big_Hugs on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:43:50 AM AEST
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this is really nice. to me it isn't mean nor does it make you feel that way, despite the killing part, but then if you are hurt in a way that makes you feel as if it is your fault, then i guess that is what you would feel like doing.
despite what you might think i do like this poem. i'm sorry for making you think that i didn't.
love forever
Katharine |
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Re: Stolen innocence
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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| I totally second that. I'd kill the person. Damn good write. Very heartfelt. I really liked this one. |
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