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Find Me in the Moonlight
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wish I could disappear
I'm sick and tired of being here
Of drowning in my own blood
And tears, my soul died in the flood
There's nothing left of who I was
And who you were is gone
We're broken now
You don't know what this does to me
My mind's withdrawn again
Awoken dead
Lying alone in my bed
There's so much hurt locked in my head
I can't do this anymore
Take everything, my life is yours
You choked the breath right out of me
And now I'm bound to you
I can't let go
You take away what's free in life
And look right through my pain
You don't own me
And if I choose to leave tonight
You can find me in the moonlight
I'll be watching over you
'Cause no matter what, I'll always love you
When the time comes to set me free
Please play my sweet Epiphany
And know this was the only way
Just couldn't stand to face another day
Never doubt that my love was true
My happiness was all in you
But every time I cried myself dry
Little pieces of me withered and died
I loved so much I lost my heart
I lost so much I fell apart
I'll always be there in the sky
Please remember me... I love you, goodbye
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-01-20 23:22:10]
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:42:59 PM AEST
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| wow so sad... tugged at my heart strings... hang in there moonlit, there are better days! |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:47:22 PM AEST
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| Wow great poem...remember hun i am here for you no matter what...Great write....try to hold in there. |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:54:00 PM AEST
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Oh Moonlit, this is so touching... Tho it is a splendid piece of work, it is heart-breaking...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by whisper-of-night on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:09:21 AM AEST
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| every single lines made my heart twist...... v_v I don't know what is going on, so I don't want to give you empty words, just- hang on there, life will find a way, and I (we) am always here to help...... |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:00:56 AM AEST
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| aww dee this is so heartbreaking, big hugs and lotsa love, im always here for you, sometimes it seems like you'll never smile again but its just around the corner:) love nessa |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:34:37 AM AEST
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| The frustration and pain touched me. Hold on. Great write. |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:46:30 AM AEST
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this is beautiful Moonlit, hope you can find the strength to hang in there.. you're a truly talented writer and from what i've heard and read, a wonderful person too, who would be deeply missed.. keep writing it all out instead..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:54:02 AM AEST
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| This one made me cry...so sad and heart felt. Great write |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:41:38 PM AEST
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| Very nice dear, pm me if ya can later I KNOW EXACLY how you feel. |
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:03:25 AM AEST
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| Oh wow Moonlit I could totaly relate to this one. I have been right there. I loved this one. I'm sorry you had to cry while writing it. Sometimes it's the only way I can cry anymore. |
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