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At the bottom of the lake
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:10:22 AM in AEST
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A raspy voice on the phone
I know your home alone
I have the answers your looking for
you will find her at the bottom of the lake.
A chain tied to her ancle
weighted with a brick
whoever did this I can say
must be very sick.
Her chain found miles away
took the searchers out of the way
there she has been all along
drown and awaiting for you
at the bottom of the lake.
Ironic isnt it the lake you two
liked to fish bikini tops
on a hot summer day
now she lies dead at
the bottom of that lake.
Bet you wont go back there now
you may feel haunted by her ghost some how
how is it I know you ask??
Find the answers at the bottom of the lake.
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Re: At the bottom of the lake
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:38:27 AM AEST
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crystal she is not at the bottom of the lake your a twisted little puppy arent ya?
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Re: At the bottom of the lake
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by subnet_spider on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:45:19 AM AEST
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Sometimes they get on to our nerves
So bad it hurts, so bad it burns
That we want them to suffocate
To drown them in that blue lake
Good write michelle :)
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Re: At the bottom of the lake
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:29:54 AM AEST
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| hey i liked the poem...i reckon shelby should give you a break i mean it might not actull be about somone real?is it? if it is thats pretty wrong but as long as you didnt mean it then theirs no harm in letting your anger out through poetry in fact it made a good poem just ya know dont take your anger out on people |
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Re: At the bottom of the lake
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by jme on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:06:25 AM AEST
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| Great expression of the story. Well done. |
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