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I Forgot About You
Contributed by
jme
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:05:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I have already forgotten you
I forgot
The touch of your lips on my naked skin
The way you’d bite your lip when you were thinking
How you would hold me close while sleeping (and not even know it)
And how angry you would make me when you made a mess
I don’t even remember
The sound of your voice while saying “I love you”
Your laughter
Or Sunday mornings when we made pancakes together
No more memories of
Our first camping trip,
Our first fight
Or the first time we made up
You see,
When you left…
I forgot all about you
Copyright ©
jme
... [
2004-01-21 16:05:17]
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Re: I Forgot About You
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:07:00 PM AEST
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That is so sad...But there are more fish in the sea...and I hope you find one that won't leave you...and that you remember all that with...You are good writer...Keep it up!!!!
Jamie |
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Re: I Forgot About You
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:12:37 PM AEST
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Heartfelt and wonderful poem
I hope you find love again in your life and he is the one who will be there for you always
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: I Forgot About You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:30:52 PM AEST
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Ouch...well written...
Jenni |
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Re: I Forgot About You
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST
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| The more I read of your poem the harder I cried. This really moved me. So many familiar bells rang, I guess you never forget even when you think you have. This is my favorite by you so far, although all have been good. Kie |
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