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Defenders of the Keep
Contributed by
tanna
on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 02:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Dragon lore
Days of yore
Fair haired golden maid
Creature of might
Scales like night
Exhaling breath decayed
Trembling with fear
She will persevere
Maiden pairs with beast
Wings beat violently
Air churns silently
The demon now released
The duo ascends
Apocalypse impends
For these final champions of the Keep
The enemy approaches
The battle encroaches
Angels above them weep
With one mighty breath
The duet conveys death
To the horrified mob below
Emitting great flame
With intention to maim
They set the Heavens aglow
Firedrake and nymph regard the scene
Serpentine eyes furious, blue eyes serene
The enemy surges back in terror
They've ignited the ire
They've stoked a fire
The adversarys fatal error
The unlikely pair has nothing to lose
To defend their home is what they choose
They descend with one intent
They exterminate the foe
With one wicked blow
His firey breath now spent
To her hearth they withdraw
Her family in awe
Unlikely heros who have preserved their home
These two of one heart
Must now depart
The dragon is freed to roam
Her deeds over time are forgot
But she just cannot
For in her heart she will always remember
The great firey beast
She had once released
With burning eyes like ember
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tanna
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Re: Defenders of the Keep
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 09:02:27 PM AEST
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I didn't see any crap like you referred to. Just an outstanding story/Poem! Great job.
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Re: Defenders of the Keep
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by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 09:52:41 PM AEST
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| Me either !!! couldnt see any crap.....i thought this was good....:-) |
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Re: Defenders of the Keep
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by Rose on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 11:08:56 PM AEST
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I cannot see where you thought this wasn't good. I see a story I had to read to the end, while it read well too. Fine writing to me. Gave very good details of that time. I love that time, the early celtic and lore, love that stuff......... seems sometimes, I am with it from another time, of course, thats just the dreams in me...
Always, Amber Rose :) |
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Re: Defenders of the Keep
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 12:31:57 PM AEST
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| hey everybody i found the crap |
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