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The powerful effect of PASSION
Contributed by
pumpkinpie
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:13:26 PM in AEST
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I may plunge haphazard into the ocean of your soul
Trip the light fantastic to entice you with no repent
Speak to you exquisite stanzas of unknown poets without your consent
Make my violin sing for you when my fingers carress the instrument with no control
But you own my nights of wonder and awe
And insert a galaxy of fervour and passion in my whole without informing me
You make me thirsty with desire,your eyes tickle my skin,you tease me mercifully
Litterature at it's best,you teach me romantism physically and mentally,unwilling to withdraw
You pull me down in your universe and inside a white rectangle you penetrate your love,your passion
Your deep eyes swallow me whole and the ocean of your being drip into my hair
As for I, I follow your drift with my heart,which beats as yours,and smile your natural flair
Living each moment to the fullest,the universe grants us extreme happiness----knowing that a new day begins----
January 2004
Copyright ©
pumpkinpie
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2004-01-21 17:13:26]
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:54:36 PM AEST
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flowing a beautiful masterpiece
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:54:00 AM AEST
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woW! Beautiful loving poem!!!!!!! Its really a pity you don't have many comments! This poem deserves a lot of comments! The description is very vivid. The wording is stunning! Great write!
Anne :) |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Romantism202 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:46:40 AM AEST
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| This is a Good Poem. It reminds me of the complexity of love and how everybody wants it but is afraid of it at the same time. It's very creative in describing that relationship. |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 06:50:31 PM AEST
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| THIS POEM IS SO AMAZING...!I WAS ENGULFED IN IT FROM BEGINNING TO END MAKES YOU WANT PASSION IN YOUR LIFE SOOOOO BAD HEHE ! YOU MAKE THE READER WANT TO LIVE A LIFE OF PASSION HELL IF IT'S LIKE THIS TAKE ME NOW!THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF MY FAVOURITE POEMS OUT HERE! |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Jacktripper on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:02:54 AM AEST
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| What a powerful effect this poem is... Magnificent job the verbatim you use to describe your emotions and intimacies is unreal. My favorite line, "But you own my nights of wonder and awe..and insert a galaxy of fervor and passion" You must have such a deep passion for unleashing the romanticism in poetry. Hats off to you you are truly a gifted writer. |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:37:17 PM AEST
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| nice,very fresh and well,powerful poem!good job |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:38:48 PM AEST
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I my Pretty PumpkinPie. If your most beautiful than your stanzas, dont approach me 'cause, PumpkinPie, you been hurt me. My favorite verse is: Your deep eyes swallow me whole and the ocean of your being drip into my hair.
Your so pretty good my ..........PP............
Yours faithfully .......Unknow Fan |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:18:28 PM AEST
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a wonderful work in prose, the powerful effect of PASSION is evident, well and truly, conveyed without fault.
tt |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:01:03 PM AEST
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this poem is brilliant and sweet, the beginning captivated me, it all read like a beautiful dream, simply lovely, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:59:04 PM AEST
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Wow, another beautiful one!
Spazzo |
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Re: The powerful effect of PASSION
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:25:36 AM AEST
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| Wow!!! Passionate and beautiful writing. I'm impressed, Pumpkin. |
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