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No one cared anyway
Contributed by
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:06:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Crying blood-red tears
As a ringing whistles in my ears
I am falling
I hear my heart calling
But I do not answer, I fall silently
Almost gracefully
A graceful dance of death
As I take in my last breath
Falling like a gentle autum leaf
An overwhealming feeling of relief
But I am not a golden leaf, nay
I am a black leaf I say
A broken, twisted and trampled leaf
Leaving this world would be a great relief
I could not save myself, I was a lost cause
Taking in pain just because
I would not hurt another
Only myself, no other
Life was so dull and gray
And no one cared anyway
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JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
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2004-01-21 18:06:45]
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Re: No one cared anyway
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:41:44 PM AEST
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| I'm sure people care...This is a very good poem and I hope to see more from you soon... |
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Re: No one cared anyway
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by whisper-of-night on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:51:45 PM AEST
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'A graceful dance of death
As I take in my last breath
Falling like a gentle autum leaf'
beautiful lines......... but please don't be like that, I do care! I know the life can be a bit of pain in the a** sometimes, but do not despair, hurt nobody, but more important, hurt NOT youself.... just look out, for this pair of warm hands, to gently catch the autumn leaf...... |
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