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Agony of Love
Contributed by
krazed_AnGeL101
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Her blood is dripping everywhere
She's lost so much, but she doesn't care
Her life has no meaning, everything went so wrong
How could he just leave after being there for so long
If he'd have cared, he would have stayed
But she was misled and had been played
Now she grips a wooden handle, holding it so tight
A gleaming edge, covered in blood, so soon she'll lose her life
There's no happiness, only pain
Nothing could ever be the same
Her eyes blur with tears that fall in the sink
The smell of death coming begins to stink
She had so much in her life to live for
But none of that matters to her anymore
Her mind numbs, everything goes blank
Her stomach rebels from the clorox she drank
No one could have ever guessed
All the pain she felt would lead to this
All the fear and betrayal
All the passion and pain, it's unreal
Her clothes are soaked in crimson
Blind anger and pain are directed towards him
She lifts her face to stare in the mirror
She screams out her rage and cracks it's armor
The glass shatters, flying all around
Bloodstained feet step on shards on the ground
Her milky white skin is scarred with so many lines
A small price to pay for unbelievable times
Now she regrets taking this rejection so far
But it's too late to help her shattered heart
Too late to fill in all the holes and missing pieces
It's too late to save her soul and she'll never meet Jesus.
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2004-01-21 20:54:46]
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Re: Agony of Love
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by Ianthe on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:34:05 PM AEST
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this is truly a difficult poem to read, so much pain. it is far too great a price to pay for false love. a very moving write.
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Re: Agony of Love
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:09:37 AM AEST
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REALLY WELL WRITTEN!NOT ONLY CAN YOU READ IT,BUT FEEL IT!!NICE JOB!!!
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