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A Cry For Help
Contributed by
KittyVamp
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I called out to you and you turned your face away I told you I was hurting and you said it would be okay you said that you would be there for me and to call if I needed you then you went away and I saw that you weren't being true you weren't there for me you didn't really care you just wanted to look good this was more than I could bear I made one more attempt to make it clear as day that if you didn't help me I would simply float away you laughed in my face and said that i'd be fine you treated me like a child you went over that line and now you wonder why i didn't talk to you before taking that knife out of the kitchen drawer and now you wonder why i didn't pick up the phone cuz after all is said and done you wouldn't leave me all alone i ran into the night running from the pain i ran away from anger just to try to keep sane finally i rested and took the knife in hand i thought of you and cried you'll never understand i held so much faith in you i trusted you so much and yet somehow i felt it the warmness of your touch and simply from the fact that i barely felt you there i dropped that awful blade and left it lying there I still won't talk to you because I realized then that i'm the only one I can trust I am my only friend I have to live on for me, and not for them or you I have to see the strength inside and believe that it's the truth because even though you smile and say you're there for me when it comes to the end will you really be?
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KittyVamp
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Re: A Cry For Help
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:06:47 AM AEST (User
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I love this and unfortunately I relate. I will never understand how people can turn away from you when you tell them how you feel and yet are surprised when you do something drastic, as if they thought that by ignoring your pain it would go away. God, I hate people. Love the poem though.
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Re: A Cry For Help
(User Rating: 1 ) by mercedes on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:51:21 PM AEST (User
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This poem touched me as i have been there. When it comes down to the moment of truth, no one will be there but you. It was a good write. |
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Re: A Cry For Help
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:52:16 PM AEST (User
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a most powerful poem, very important message, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Cry For Help
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:03:15 AM AEST (User
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Wow this is a powerfull write and really needed to said.
I find it hard to comprehend the fact that parents, (some) have children then abandon them when they need u most.
It's really sad.
My heart goes out to u'll and I know I can't take your pain away but I can hold u close to my heart.
Hang tuff angel
huggs, luv,
emy |
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