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Hell
Contributed by
hawaii06
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:48:28 PM in AEST
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Horrid place, everlasting fires.
People sit in cells, burning, smoke steaming from their body.
Cant leave the fire.
Horrid stench; never leaving; just like you.
Demons, never leaving your side; nagging,
Ripping your soul to pieces.
Hatred, horror and disgust.
You will burn in the pits of hell,
Never allowed to leave the pain.
You are full of anguish and hatred.
No love.
Bye love; all I feel is pain,
I smell horror and disgust.
Youre burning in the pits of hell, to the point of no return.
You shall burn in the pits of hell forever.
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Re: Hell
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:09:46 PM AEST
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Hmmm very positive (lol kidding) Well thats what most ppl depict hell. Your poem is good hmmm makes you think about what hell would be like. Mine will be full of exams lol. Keep on writing! P.s You was inspired to write this poem in class, hmmmm...
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