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A lesson learned
Contributed by
parisstcair
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Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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At first my heart was broken. How would it ever mend again? After all the lonely cries I made. The painful sleep that I engaged. Everyone saying "Paris it's going to be okay." It took awhile to get over you. I should've never opened up to you. You stole my hopes,my dreams,my ever wanting to succeed. Many times I cried out. I hate you! I really truly HATE you! I learned a lesson from my mistakes. Just because someone says they love you it's all just sweet talk. Just because we are broken up doesn't mean I will forget about you. I just have to move on,and find someone new.
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Re: A lesson learned
(User Rating: 1 ) by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:54:21 PM AEST (User
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very true...and you are a very good writer...keep it up..hope to see more from you soon....... |
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Re: A lesson learned
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:06:33 PM AEST (User
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Yeah its so sad when you loose someone you love. Grr makes me angry thinking. *Calms down* I liked this poem, written from the heart! Never give up the last verse has a great attitude Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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