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In my dreams
Contributed by
MissLee
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Silky dew covered petals of a rose,
Fragrant smells waft to my nose,
Ancient stones in the castle wall speak of long ago,
While leaves dance to and fro,
Making a sound so light to the ear,
That one can scarcely hear,
Kings of legends long foretold,
Lived in this fortress once full of gold,
Those times are long forgotten now,
And the history books try and tell us how,
But for those who lived here life was not always so great,
For some were imprisoned behind the gate,
But as history repeats itself,
The memories are kept upon my shelf,
Some in books and some in dreams,
Of longed for and forgotten scenes.
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2004-01-22 16:56:38]
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Re: In my dreams
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:02:35 PM AEST
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Wow!!! Very vivid description! I loved this poem bacause I love historical things. Very well written! makes you picture the poem in your head. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: In my dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:17:40 PM AEST
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| oh misslee, this poem is enchanting! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In my dreams
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:10:19 PM AEST
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| Beautiful job. I love this kind of poetry. Its very inspiring. keep it up! |
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Re: In my dreams
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:21:57 PM AEST
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lovely and flowing with a hint of a light heart and talented hand
michelle |
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Re: In my dreams
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by Jolly on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 08:28:12 PM AEST
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| I love this. I see pictures in my minds. Ancient stone castles...I smell the roses. I wish I could write lyric poetry the way that you do. It's beautiful. I want to find something to criticize...but I can't LOL. There's just so much beauty that it overwhelms. That's it! Too much beauty....LOL. |
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