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Unwanted
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My thoughts are of suicide My mind it is haunted Of my past and my pain How I am the one unwanted
My thoughts are darkened As I bleed for all I can not take Ive been the one unwanted And my life it was a mistake
My thoughts become sadden By the tears I have caused To be wanted was my fight One that has now ended
And even now I have no place to go By my pain I am still haunted And even here in hell I am unwanted
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2004-01-22 18:55:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unwanted
(User Rating: 1 ) by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:25:32 PM AEST (User
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i so know what it feels like. u write so well, i hope u keep writing. hope to see more from ya. |
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Re: Unwanted
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkYYBLu on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 08:04:08 PM AEST (User
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Wow, you put this so well...I can relate. Great write! Keep it up! :)
~Paige |
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Re: Unwanted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Baronhawk on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 11:11:37 AM AEST (User
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Woo...high emotions here...it is terrible to feel unwanted...I cannot really relate...for my particular fiasco is not fitting in wherever I go..always the odd duck. But I guess its the same in some cases...that terrible feeling of rejection wherever you go and whatever you do...I can at least feel some of that pain. |
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