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Me Versus You
Contributed by
remy
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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when it's me versus you
it's so not fair
but here i am
and there you go
settle down child, i know that you're wild
you can paint me a picture with some touch of your style
...i hear your mother calling you out in the background
she should stake a look at your creation and be proud
well how about now...a commotion caused a scene to be seen
i should exit to step away now from what it could mean
i mean it's the oppurtunity that you should have missed
but you made it your own, even sealed it with a kiss
it's so not fair
but here i am
and there you go, well what can you
know you don't care
that here i am
it seemed as so, well what can you
settle down child, i'm not to check you out
we could put our heads together figure what it's about
...i saw a little resemblance right down a mystery
it reminded me of you as we passed all the scenery
it won't be long before this scene gets cut
long after you stench around your cigarette butt
for what it's worth not in the literal sense
just a gift wrapping that eases your tensed cup...
i'm not making this up...
but that's okay, it's just like yesterday
it's so not fair
but here i am
and there you go, well what can i
know you don't care
that here i am
it seemed as so, well what can i do...
when it's me versus you
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-01-22 21:19:35]
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Re: Me Versus You
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by a_bear on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 02:17:02 AM AEST
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| Really good. Everythings so not fair. It's so not fair that ..well never mind. What is fair is that you've been given a great gift and you share it with us. Thank you. |
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Re: Me Versus You
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:08:36 PM AEST
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| life's not fair but you've gotta live it the best you can.... ***hugs*** |
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