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Just feelings
Contributed by
Patch81
on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 06:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A man with no life begs for something
Not knowing where his life has gone
But no where he see's
Is something more worth than his life,
With nothing to lose nor gain
From his life he once had
Will carry his emotion's toward a new day
Still with nothing in his life
Was it once love he knew
Or a lost loved one he once loved
But anything else he grew so cold about
Cost it his life, his pride, his heart to wilter
For this one man the only man he knew
Had a life of happiness with his own life
Even if his expressions never showed
But he once had something to fight for
Not now nor anytime in the distant future
Will his pride be rewarded with the feeling's
The feeling's he once carried for anything
That had meant truth and love in his heart
Distant he carries himself from all
As though he had hidden in a dark corner
But only in his own prisoned mind
Which he had made from his hurt and sorrow,
I was turning like this man
With love and happiness in my heart
For my certain lady i had loved so dearly
And she had made my mind flourish with love
But as i also see myself be torn apart
From my own hurt that I had placed myself in
By myself to hurt for my own fault's is only my punishment
And i must live with my own faults i had made
For that one storie he had told
Made me know that i was only one man
To give only one heart away
To that one special ladie of mine
But if my own mind had not clouded my thought's
Of how i wished love would be in my own life
I would still have that loved one
That i once wished to have
The myth, the storie he had imprinted in my mind
Made me see that my fault's was like every other man
Who was once a kind and gentle as me
But let love and hatred cover my heart and turned me astray.
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Patch81
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2002-09-03 06:22:05]
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Re: Just feelings
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:48:07 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful
Very heartfelt and touching
and full of pain and hurt
I really enjoyed reading this
it brought tears to my
eyes. Thank you for
sharing it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Just feelings
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:30:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful work ;*). |
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