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Lost and alone...
Contributed by
brandywyne
on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 08:57:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Caught up in an emotional whirlwind
spinning out of control.
Thoughts of anger and sorrow
running through my mind.
Seeking peace from the madness
Seeking shelter from the pain.
Hoping soon it's what I'll find.
Which way do I turn?
Which road do I travel?
there is no map to read.
Seeking answers to my questions
Seeking hope when all feels lost.
Hoping to be freed.
My heart feels ripped in two
not knowing what to do....
Copyright ©
brandywyne
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2004-01-23 08:57:38]
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Re: Lost and alone...
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:12:52 AM AEST
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I cn relate 2 times like this more than once.
u have discrbed the pain well in this one.
Very good job altho a bit sad.
Hang tuff and keep up the great writing!
luv, huggs, healing,
emy
Thanks for your comment to my write. I appreciate u. |
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