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My new self
Contributed by
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
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Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 11:44:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Ripples form as each drop of blood does fall As I slowly crawl My eyes see a wave of color, a flash of light I hear the Siren calling to me in the night I have become like her a souless being My eyes start seeing What I am supposed to be An Angel of death, now I am free My back is torn wide open as my wings burst out of my skin I had for so long kept them in They are slick and blck And as the blood runs down my back I begin to laugh, finally I am free My skin turns pale and white I look out my window to the black night I look in the mirror and see I am being set free My eyes become red The color of the blood I will soon shed My hair becomes long and black As the tresses fall onto my back I laugh, I no longer have to sacrifce To be the hunter for once will be nice No longer the huntee am I For my wings shall carry me up high
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Re: My new self
(User Rating: 1 ) by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:02:57 PM AEST (User
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Wow ho ho! So the dark angel is reborn again! Be afraid..... be very afraid........ ^_^ Nice imagery, I can almost see it enfold right in front of me! 'No longer the huntee am I/ For my wings shall carry me up high'..... Now, this is the kinda spirit I am looking for!
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Re: My new self
(User Rating: 1 ) by jme on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:26:54 PM AEST (User
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Your words were very vivid. Great job. |
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