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I DIED FOR LOVE OF THEE
Contributed by
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:46:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You tell me to stop for God's sake
That it will do more than I intend it to take
But little do you know I do it where no real harm can be done
Because you are the one
I do it for
For my love grows everyday so much more
Than I wanted to feel
But it is real
It overpowers me
Why don't you see?
You say stop it for you sake, as if you cared
Maybe you do, but my heart with you I shared
And I am sorry I dared
To love someone so far above me
Why did I not see?
That you could never love me
As I slit my throat and bleed to death
"I love you" I mutter with my last breath
I die for you, I die for love of thee
How can you not see?
My body might not be dead, it will go on "existing"
But my soul and heart are dead, and I am not really "living"
I died for you
I died for love of thee
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Re: I DIED FOR LOVE OF THEE
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by Merry on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 06:00:15 PM AEST
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A very intense write - darkly romantic - hope you don't really feel this way over anyone - cause it's never worth it. And the good news is, there is someone new just around the corner.
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Re: I DIED FOR LOVE OF THEE
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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| Wow girl, cutting oneself is terriable enough! And cutting oneself's throat?! That goes too far....... 'died for you, died for thee', it may sounds romantic and touching, but is it really worth it?? If he do care, a few tears he might shed;(and what can that do?!) And if he don't! the blood would feed only to the earth, and break the heart of others who care about you........ |
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Re: I DIED FOR LOVE OF THEE
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by SkYYBLu on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 07:37:20 PM AEST
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OMG I feel exactly the same way sometimes...EXCELLENT WRITE!! Keep it up!!
~Paige |
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Re: I DIED FOR LOVE OF THEE
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by EternitysLyre on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 09:00:45 AM AEST
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Passionate. The emotion runs strong in your veins, and you grasp it with utmost precision. I hope it's out of you, and poured into this poem rather than raging violently in your blood still.
Good job.
“True wisdom is the evasive butterfly; after hours of chasing and searching in vain, you find, if you sit quietly, it may alight upon you.”
~The Palatine Poet |
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