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The Weight of the World on My Shouldar
Contributed by
remi
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:31:33 AM in AEST
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THE WEIGHT OF THE WORLD ON MY SHOULDAR
Nov 11, 03
2:45 pm
I wake up and relize where I'm at and look around at the things
I don't want to see anymore my breath shorter like a fish on dry land
and the urges to cry comes.
Dreaming of the things I will never get to be or accomplish
Never to be love by a man
Never a Love of a father who I see everyday with my tearful eye
I realize that I'm 21 yrs old and don't even have a small goal to show for it
How I sit on the side line while he is the saver of the family, how he the prodigy
I drag my feet more and everyday as I look and see the weight of the world on my shouldar pushing me down the sidewalk becoming quicksand
and I'm sinking and realize the weight of the world have a familar face I once called them mom and dad
Remy Maskantinio
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remi
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2004-01-24 02:31:33]
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Re: The Weight of the World on My Shouldar
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:43:30 AM AEST
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this is so sad!! I do understand this more than you know.If needed you can pm me anytime.
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Re: The Weight of the World on My Shouldar
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:54:26 AM AEST
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Surpurbly written!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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