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Why
Contributed by
annabell
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 03:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Why does life continue on this way?
Will I ever have my say?
This day seems like it will never end.
My withdraw I wish I could send.
A true friend would be nice.
Most people are just cold as ice.
Will there be someone for me
The gold outline I can't see.
How much longer will this last?
Into I deep see I feel like I've been cast.
I'm drowning and there's no lifeline in sight,
even though I'm swimming with all my might.
It seems like a dark abyss.
Everytime I try to grab something I miss.
Can someone save this life of mine?
before I cross the line.
Copyright ©
annabell
... [
2004-01-24 15:52:57]
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Re: Why
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 04:15:32 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem. Its dark and heck if you haven't figured it out yet i love dark! 2 typos and thats all i see. The poem itself i loved. keep on doing your thing! |
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