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Rape
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:31:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She was walking down the street alone
It was dark and the night was cold
This girl is only twelve years old
She's taken by a guy so bold
In an alley is where he goes
He throws her down, ripping off her clothes
She pleas with him to let her go
His intentions she already knows
Violently he forces himself on top
She screams in pain, pleading him to stop
She's so afraid and begins to cry
As he continues forcing himself inside
She hits and screams so he ties her up
He puts cloth in her mouth and tapes it shut
Unable to move she lyes there still
Shivered by the dark night chill
Unable to fight, he does what he wants
Tears fall from her eyes as he taunts
He whispers to her 'Soon this all will be done'
He pushes harder & faster, he starts to come
Out of breath, he comes to an end
But what he's done will never mend
From his pocket he pulls out a knife
And softly tells her 'I'll take your life'
He cuts from her neck to her private parts
He reaches in and pulls out her heart
He puts it in a jar and takes it home
Puts it on a shelf then lyes down alone
This twelve year old girl was sent to her grave
But this is reality of a society that rapes.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-01-24 18:31:51]
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Re: Rape
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by lonesomerose on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:45:13 PM AEST
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sad
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Re: Rape
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:47:58 PM AEST
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that is reality that moved me
a little vulgar but what elees can u say that is how it happens great write keep up the good work
chat |
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Re: Rape
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by Elf on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:14:22 PM AEST
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in all truth, this is a sad reality. I, myself have seen this kind of thing happen.
A young child struck down simply because they were at the wrong place at the wrong time. I see just how lucky I am that I didn't get killed..... It was my luck that my b/f came by before that happened... *shivers* I thank God for him....
Such a sad, sad realty.......
-*Valen*- |
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Re: Rape
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:02:43 AM AEST
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Interesting... I'm not quite sure how I should take this, since it seems to me it can be taken both on a literal and metaphorical level. Either way, it's excellent. Sad, no doubt, but excellent.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Rape
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by parisstcair on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:22:45 AM AEST
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| I really,really,really love this peom. You pointed out things that nomarl people wouldn't think about. Reality is tough just like lfe. Some people just have to deal with it,but great poem. |
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Re: Rape
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:07:06 PM AEST
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very well done..sad reality of a society which worships power ...and uses it to pervert
Shari |
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Re: Rape
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:53:02 PM AEST
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| Yes this really does happen in life. I could say it happen to me but thank god I am still a live. |
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Re: Rape
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST
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surprised I missed this one. I found it hard to read as you express yourself so well. I hate watered down crap and this was screaming in my face so top marks for u.
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Re: Rape
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:55:09 PM AEST
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yeah this is incredible too.. but Hollywood Horror still stands as my favourite! But all your poetry's great cilla.. one day i'll work my way through them all!
charlotte x_x_x |
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