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Did She Really Dump Him
Contributed by
Merry
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:47:41 PM in AEST
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I heard it was over
He moved out of her place
She took up with a drummer
Hes not seeing anybody
*
He said he needs a break
Doesnt want to get burned again
Hes living in his brothers camper
I resist the urge to take him in
*
She said he was an arrogant bastard
But I never noticed that
He just had things he wanted to do
She could never understand that
*
I saw him yesterday at the beach
He looked tired and a little rumpled
I invited him over to dinner sometime
He said hed give me a call
*
I heard he moved in with a new girl
Shes from Colorado
I feel my heart sink
So what was I thinking anyhow
*
A knock on the door
Hes standing there alone
I invite him in for a drink
Hes more quiet than usual
*
He says hes tired can he stay the night
I give him a blanket and turn out the light
I wonder where Miss Denver is
But I cant bring myself to ask
*
Its been a month now since Miss Denver dumped him
He sleeps in my bed now
He snores and hogs the blankets
Im still amazed when I wake up next to him
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Merry
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2004-01-24 18:47:41]
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Re: Did She Really Dump Him
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:20:58 PM AEST
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Well I never saw that ending coming! I thought it was a great poem and I wish you the very best.
Kie |
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Re: Did She Really Dump Him
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:13:07 PM AEST
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ohhh I loved that!! Things do work out in an odd fashion sometimes. You have a story telling style all your own Gaille and I love everything you write. You are a true talent
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Re: Did She Really Dump Him
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by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:25:11 AM AEST
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| Nice story - wish you the best of luck! |
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Re: Did She Really Dump Him
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by CountryGirl on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:17:41 PM AEST
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| WOW! That was deep. Good Job. |
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Re: Did She Really Dump Him
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:38:31 PM AEST
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| Interesting how things turn out. Good story. I liked it. Nicely written too. |
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