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Dark Places
Contributed by
sweetpeall
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:21:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting in a pitch dark room
I sit on my bed and cry
at times I wish I were in a tomb
why'd you leave me here to die
the sun will rise and the sun will set
bring forth another black day
my life I feel is just another bet
nothing goes my way
I have failed my friends and family too
my decisions always depend on the support
given by you
you're always there for me
to help me through
now I can see a friendship so true
Copyright ©
sweetpeall
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2004-01-24 23:21:06]
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Re: Dark Places
(User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:19:31 AM AEST
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| True friends are invaluable. Nicely written. |
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Re: Dark Places
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:35:57 PM AEST
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I loved how your story was told
A friend brought you out to see the light
Fantastic
Well done
Keep smiling and stay in the light
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Dark Places
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:15:04 PM AEST
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| Almost hopeful in the end of it... Very sorrowful feel to it all the way through. It was an interesting write. I liked it though. Sometimes you aren't failing as much as you think you are though. |
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