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It's my fault innet, the way you make me feel!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:48:32 AM in AEST
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my thoughts are flaming,
my mind is straining,
the world is spinning,
faces are grinning.
my heavy body's turning,
the whispers stirring,
my emotions changing,
into anger and hating.
i'm trying to move,
i'm trying to go,
you hit me against the wall,
my wall says "HELLO!"
i hit you hard,
you fall to the ground,
i have your blood is on me,
the crowds are around.
and see that's just the thing,
that you ticked me first,
it doesn't matter what you did,
that you made my brain burst.
it doesn't matter about me!
coz i ain't in hospital,
and now it's my fault,
that you started it all!
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2004-01-25 06:48:32]
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Re: It's my fault innet, the way you make me feel!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:16:23 AM AEST
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God work!
very well said.
Very strong write that makes one the brain as it puts one to thinking.
luv, huggs,
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