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RAPED
Contributed by
teresa23
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I lay there sobbing and shaking
Hopefully someone is waking
Do they hear me cry and scream?
Or do they think it's just a dream?
I need someone to hear
Cause this guy is to near
Then he climbed into bed
The fears were running through my head
As he got on top
I yelled at him to STOP
I tried to get away
He pinned me down and made me stay
As I felt him force it in
I knew there was no chance for me to win
As I felt the pain down there
I kneew from there he didn't care
He finished what he started
Our bodies then become departed
For I wished this was only a dream
Cause I had just reached the age of fourteen
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teresa23
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2004-01-25 15:54:48]
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Re: RAPED
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:03:25 PM AEST
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This is so sad and happened to one of my best friends...except she was 8 years old..I hope you will still live your life to the fullest and not let that interfere with your life choices...If you need someone to talk to..I'm here...
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Re: RAPED
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:24:06 PM AEST
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| You should had kicked his balls and bite off his head!^_^ Well, I hope this is just only a poem and nothing more, otherwise........v_v The last line really add certain degree of shocks and sadness, nice work. |
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Re: RAPED
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by Mouth on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:42:01 PM AEST
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I am so sorry. That is tragic. You should listen to the song, 'Me and a Gun', by Tori Amos. You are not alone. Keep writing.
Sarah |
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Re: RAPED
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:25:59 PM AEST
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Oh my! I'm very sad! Rape is a terrible thing! One of the worst things that can happen to a person and the poem describes it well.
Keep on writing
Anne |
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Re: RAPED
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:39:31 AM AEST
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| That is horrid. I hate rapists. Good write. Very powerful. |
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