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Friendless lust
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A simple pain
An endless time
A friendless lust
An abandoned thought
A deserted mind
A lonely mood
A frosty pain
An artic time
A Bitter lust
An Icy thought
A Distant mind
A Ditached mood
A throbbing pain
An blinding time
A tending lust
An twinging thought
A sorrowed mind
A hurting mood
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2004-01-25 17:42:23]
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Re: Friendless lust
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:51:01 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem...and I greatly enjoyed reading it...Keep WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Jamie |
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Re: Friendless lust
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:19:17 PM AEST
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| Nice format. Each to their own. |
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Re: Friendless lust
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by Butterat_Zool on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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| what potent emotions you have captured in your words... it's like a great sensual mystery... Butterat Zool. |
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