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Blind
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:22:38 PM in AEST
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I scream every hour
I feel this worlds strain
Yet no one can heal
My unceasing pain
A thousand knives slide into me
But no one pulls them out
I can see their smiling faces
No one hears me shout
Why will tomorrow
Be like today
Why wont anyone
Just make it change
There is no knight
In shining armour
No dragon
That hell slay
There is no one
To save my soul
They all just
Fade away
I fall in the crowd
I walk with the crowd
We each commit
The same crimes
Tell me, Oh dreamer
Full of sweet sorrow
Am I the only
Not blind?
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InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-01-25 18:22:38]
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Re: Blind
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by Shadow on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:36:54 PM AEST
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| Unique and dark. good combo. the style is good and i love it. and good question. Who amongest us isn't blind? |
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Re: Blind
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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Very good poem...I loved it..It was very deep and emotional...keep it up..
jamie |
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Re: Blind
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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| Very interesting write. I liked it. Very good use of wording. I enjoyed what I got out of this one. |
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