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DIE DIE SUICIDE
Contributed by
jkpunk13
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:53:19 PM in AEST
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die die suicide were turning on you
die die suicide were all sick and its the truth
die die suicide thats what we have to say
die die suicide your just some stupid way
because you destroy families you destroy homes
you mess with peoples minds and wont leave them alone
you sneak into their minds and you plant a chip
to take that razor blade and to call it quiets
does it matter to you what happens after that??
do you stare at a body were a life once sat
weve all thought about it once or twice
about calling in and taken are lives
but still I would never give you reign
to kill myself and call you king
I rather have my brain be torn from my head
than pronoce that blood my new bed
die die suicide y dont YOU call it quiets
die die suicide take a razor blade and call that it
WOULD YOUR FAMILY BE SHATTERED TORN INSIDE??
WOULD YOUR FREINDS BE BROKEN BLAME IT ON BEING HIGH???
BUT NO YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW HOW THAT FEALS!!!!
BECAUSE YOUR NOT ANYTHING...BUT YOUR something....and i wish that you werent real
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Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:03:32 PM AEST
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so deep and sad..I could never think of doing that.......AHHHHHHHHHH..........Good poem though...
Keep writing..
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Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE
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by full_blur on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:54:50 PM AEST
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| powerful. Your writing style is frightninly direct. Gives me a lot to think about as well. awesome! |
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Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE
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by bgeorge_275 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:26:50 PM AEST
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| WOW! This poem really made me think about my life and think about why I've wanted to commit suicide. Its an awesome poem and I love your style. |
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Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:30:38 AM AEST
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| Wow this was filled with power. Yes! Never give in to the dying of the light. I think this was relatively well written. I enjoyed reading it. |
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