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The Music
Contributed by
forever--jo
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Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 11:47:43 PM in AEST
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The music has began to play
Started stealin, my heart away
Along it took al my fears
Filled my eyes with happy tears
The Music seemed to last forever
And my feelings were getting deeper
Just when I thought it'll eternally run
In a blink of an eye the music has gone
The Music has totally stopped palying
Leaving my poor heart cold and aching
The pain it brings would be hard to mend
How it died, I still can't comprehend
The Music has now started
Only this time it plays on my head
Then came back all my fears
Filled my eyes with unhappy tears.
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forever--jo
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2004-01-25 23:47:43]
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Re: The Music
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:34:35 AM AEST
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So saddening, this is a very descriptive poem... Great write...
Cheers,
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Re: The Music
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:56:03 AM AEST
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What a sweet/bitter poem! Music can have this effect! Especially if it reminds you of lost things. Beautifully written! Great write!
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