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Take Me Away
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:38:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Rape me, kill me, eat me alive
Let me be the victim on which you thrive
Feast upon this bodys blood
Let me no longer see mornings sun
Take from me my last ounce of sanity
And let me experience the pleasure of brutality
Have me scream in such agonized pain
Let my tears pour out like rain
Let my soul appear to your taste
But please hurry, time you cant waste
Let me bring the pleasure that fills your soul
Making you feel completely full
Cut my skin and expose my bones
End this feeling of being alone.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-26 01:38:40]
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Re: Take Me Away
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by mercedes on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:56:42 AM AEST
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| Im not sure how to comment on this one but it defiently caught my attention. |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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.... *Jaw hits the ground*....
That was beautiful.... I really liked that poem... It was so morbid... So darkly beautiful... Excellent... |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:01:48 AM AEST
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I'm not sure how to approach this, but I can somewhat relate to the futility in this poem. Very good and descriptive...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:49:27 AM AEST
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Whoa........*tries calm down* Wow geez what a poem! I love it!!!!!!!! I really do!! Amazing!! Don't know how to describe it but I love it! WoW!! Glad to have read it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:27:33 PM AEST
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oh this is one of the best i have read of yours so far cilla.. great stuff..
char x_x_x |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:10:53 PM AEST
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| don't know what to say really....(which is unususal for me!^_^)..... but this poem.... actually.... almost all of your poems I had read so far, everytime when I read it, I wish I didn't, but after I am done, I can't help read it again!!! Weird.....o_O well, I guess that is the magic of your work entice me so...... |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:40:36 PM AEST
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| Wow. This was kinda morbid and dark. I liked it alot. Nicely written. I think I write the exact opposite side.... Maybe I do write this one too. Lol. Very nice though. Strong write. |
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