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Tears that bleed
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:41:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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* ~* Eyes burning with fire in them and the salt in my mouth tastes bitter from the tears that have fallen upon me
Sliding across my cheek
Every drop painful to take in
The tissues that soaked so fast like an ocean wave drifting along the shore
Hurts to breath and look at everyone
Lack everything and pretend to be happy with a smirk across my face losing innocence
Keeping that true feeling within me still deep inside.. * ~ *
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2004-01-26 01:41:17]
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Re: Tears that bleed
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:46:21 AM AEST
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Oh this is very very very sad!! Short and bitter, I liked the wway you wrote it very touching! Keep writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: Tears that bleed
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:46:28 AM AEST
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Oh this is very very very sad!! Short and bitter, I liked the way you wrote it very touching! Keep writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: Tears that bleed
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by TundraHydra on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:20:17 AM AEST
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| Had this feeling more than once. Great write! |
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