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Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:11:48 AM in AEST
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I could write of summer days;
of valleys wreathed in misty haze;
of clouds of painted butterflies;
of face-shaped clouds in azure skies;
of a magic woodland glade,
with dappled light and cooling shade.
I could write of ancient trees,
that stir and whisper in the breeze.
I could write much more but wont !!
Are these the words that I should write but dont ??
For in every sky - thunder rolls;
behind each tree - elves and trolls.
And in that woodland glade at night,
things with claws and things that bite,
monsters concealed throughout the day,
emerge at dusk in search of prey.
The princess in her golden tower ??
becomes a witch at the midnight hour.
And fairies arent such beautiful things.
Fairies are spite with gossamer wings
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2004-01-26 05:11:48]
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Re: Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
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by maryetta on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:26:29 AM AEST
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well my friend, you have hit the perfect medium, that poem was breathtaking, i loved it emensly and being a fantasy lover you hit my right chord. for every good there is bad and man comes somewhere in between.
keep it up write me more like that.
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Re: Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:00:11 AM AEST
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Very good and interesting.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:41:17 AM AEST
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Wow . . . absolutely fantastic! Remind me to check out more of yours in the future.
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Re: Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:50:38 AM AEST
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Damn...A perfect balance between the two sides, and held together with superb rhymes. I love contrast, and this poem does it exceedingly well.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Fairies Are Spite - with Gossamer Wings
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:11:41 AM AEST
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Wow! What an interesting poem I loved it very original I especially loved the last stanza great writing!!
Anne :D |
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