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No Pain
Contributed by
pain_and_tears
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:51:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I see the light,
I feel no pain.
The blade is sharp,
I feel no pain.
The blood runs cold,
I feel no pain.
The sheet turns red,
I feel no pain.
As the light fades,
I feel no pain.
All is gone now,
and I felt no pain.
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Re: No Pain
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:02:21 PM AEST
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So sad! Written with much pain. Hope you're feeling better and still with the living (at least to read the comment :p) Keep on writing great write :D
Anne |
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Re: No Pain
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by Letting_Go on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:33:32 PM AEST
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| That last line - I felt no pain. Got me somehow. Sadness in suicide writes. |
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Re: No Pain
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by L-Dee on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:30:56 PM AEST
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Truely sad poem, I can feel your pain.
Maybe you will like my poem the shadow or maybe not, please read. |
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