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I Will Wait
Contributed by
night_child
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:27:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your presence will not leave
Still I feel your sweet words like daggers through my heart
Forever will you torture me?
Please just go..
The memories are just too much
You pushed me away
Not a care in your eye
I was nothing to you
But you were everything to me
And you always will be
I feel..alone
I want you by my side
Though that cannot be
I've tried to tell myself you're gone
I really have
But my heart refuses to believe
So for eternity I will wait
In my lonely darkness
Yes
I will wait
For the answer to my prayers
I will wait
For you
But you will never come...
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night_child
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2004-01-26 17:27:25]
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Re: I Will Wait
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:38:36 PM AEST
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So sad, understand your pain very well. Hope everything is allroght now. Very touching poem! Keep on writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: I Will Wait
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by Kirby on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:52:41 PM AEST
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| This is a very touching poem and I didn't think that others were in the same boat as I am in right now! SO I know what u are going though hun! I hope that you and I can get over that waiting and find the perfect person for us because I try to believe that the person that we wait for at night and all the time won't be there if they are not there already! SO we have to move onn becaue we are better then them! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: I Will Wait
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by monica109 on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:09:27 AM AEST
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| In some wired way I'm waiting Anthony to. This poem explains the loss I feel without him, the hidden hope I hold and pretend isn't there. This poem ripes at my heart for I know I'm not alone in this sea of love's tempest destitude |
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Re: I Will Wait
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:15:23 PM AEST
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| This was so sad. I hope it returns to you. Waiting is painful. Waiting without knowing is worse. |
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