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What you did
Contributed by
tecnorobo
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:46:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You are just a tease, im tired of aiming to please, if all you can aim for is me on my knees- we could've rocked the world sea by sea, but you have ruined me emotionally.
The trap has been set, the trigger has been sprung, my heart in a noose, its neck has been hung, punctured lungs- you left me gasping for breath, you looked inside and took all that was left
And did i fail to mention? I tried everything just to grab your attention. Cruel intentions- is all that you had, left my crawling for days, driving me mad
Now i sit thinkin about what we shoulda been, how we coulda been, for how long we woulda been.
My souls been stabbed, my brain drove insane- you could've just said no but you needed your own fame. You break peoples' hearts with your "innocent" game. Eventually you'll fall and rot in your own shame.
Now I will admit- I'm not over you yet, but the feelings that i have aren't love, they're disrespect. Neglect, sadness, so many pains and aches, was it me or was it you that made the mistakes?
I only wish i knew what it is you wanted, what it takes.
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2004-01-26 18:46:39]
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Re: What you did
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by Letting_Go on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 07:31:17 PM AEST
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| I can see why this is one of your favourites. I truely loved it too. I can totally relate, and I am ashamed to say I have played this game more than once. The first time didn't hurt but the second time came back on me and really hurt the person whom I can't get over at the moment. Definately learn some lessons in life. Loved this poem, one of my favourites so far. |
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Re: What you did
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:23:43 PM AEST
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| This was a very powerful write. It really drew me in and kept me interested. Nicely done. |
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