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Dark Territory
Contributed by
secretwind
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:17:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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footsteps echo echo echo
down the hall
bouncing off the walls walls
as innervisions illuminate
what is in my mind
mirrors reflecting
the illusion that is reality.
ooh
random thoughts
ebb and flow
and i really do not know
what i am doing sometimes
so i vanish
into the shadows
so no one can see
ooh
buried deep
a emotional wind
from all that is happening
crescendos
deep inside
this blackboard has no chalk
so i don't talk
i just silently scream.
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secretwind
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2004-01-27 00:17:13]
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Re: Dark Territory
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:21:43 AM AEST
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Good write. I like the depth in it, I especially like the last line. Very good ending.. Keep up the good work..
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Re: Dark Territory
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:01:58 AM AEST
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VEry good. I know the feeling.
especially the silent scream. I take meds now that helps me deal with what comes my way.
sometimes I get silent and wait for what ever it is to bubble up and out the pen.
a masterpeice, no doubt as I'm sure most folks can relate.
hugg, luv,
Thanks for all your awesome comments on my work.
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