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Minutes like Hours
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:30:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The minutes click by, it seems like hours
The hours seem like days
The days like years
I still sense your arms around me
I look up half excepting to see you smiling down at me
But your not so I hold my self and remember
Your voice still gently whispers in my ear
Your aroma is still in my clothes
Slowly all of this is fading into nothingness
I need to feel your embrace
I want to feel your tough
I love you so much and miss you almost as much
Before long we will be together
Soon we can touch and cuddle together once more
I cant wait till we are together again
So I watch the minutes go by like hours
The hours like days and the days like years
I wait for the day that I can see you again
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2004-01-27 01:30:15]
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:59:56 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful... don't you dare change a thing. |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:31:58 PM AEST
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i feel the pain..i can't see my bf for awhile either.........stay strong though and good write!
luv always |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:44:23 PM AEST
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| Hey Lil_Angel I liked the poem. The last line and the first line of the second last paragraph though gives me a sense that he is dead for some reason. But all in all a nice heartfelt write. I'm sure he will like it just the way it is. |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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NOW THAT SOUNDS VERY HEART FELT,LUCKY GUY!NICE POEM!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:18:09 PM AEST
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Nice work.I hope you are getting those cuddles now and lots of them.
It is nice to love and be loved back
steve |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Khosrow on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 04:39:35 PM AEST
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I liked again the choosing of wording and the ambience displayed or should I say, radiated by this poem.
Excellent job! |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by b_rand on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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| well im new here ... so i see all these people writing "wow i really felt that one" abuot all these poems and honestly i didnt feel anything about any of them until I came across this one ... I also got the idea that whoever your talking of is dead ... but this one ... this is definitely an emotion arouser. great job |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:16:46 PM AEST
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| Nice I liked this one. It was very powerful to me. |
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Re: Minutes like Hours
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:30:20 PM AEST
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| I hope you get your wish. *S* Cynthia |
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