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MY DAD!
Contributed by
jlsldy1
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:33:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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There was a man
I called him Dad
never unhappy
always glad
He passed away
one October day
That day of sadness
always to stay
Now my dad he was so ill
Never complained,
that would never fit his bill
He was good too one
good to all
That day came
that terrible fall
I miss Andrew, that was his name
The man I called Daddy
losing him such a shame!
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jlsldy1
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2004-01-27 01:33:59]
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Re: MY DAD!
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:51:52 AM AEST
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| excellent wrtie! keep the coming |
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Re: MY DAD!
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:52:57 AM AEST
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| I know how that feels! My own Daddy just died on December 12, 2003. |
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Re: MY DAD!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:40:18 AM AEST
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Sorry 4 your loss.
My father passed away 7 years ago this month.
we'll always miss them.
Very good writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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