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The Road to Nowhere!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:48:33 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Sometimes I feel I'm walking on a road to nowhere,
Walking alone wishing one day I'd get there,
looking at things that pass me by,
not knowing where,when,& why,
searching for an open path way,
leading somewhere,so I pray,
so much has happened in the journeys end,
death,births, and creating new friends,
Walking slowly never got me far,
trying to follow the brightest star,
looking behind me once in a while,
as I walk each & every mile,
Once I get where I'm suppose to be,
than I can relax,and be just me,
The road to life is curvy & rough,
walking it alone I found was tough,
but makes you all more stronger & wise,
getting through the journey is your prize,
The road to nowhere has an end,
you'll find it where the road slightly bends!
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:03:51 PM AEST
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beautiful Christina with a great message.
michelle
(when you feel your walking it alone know that Im walking up behind you to help you along) |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:04:57 PM AEST
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Oh what a thoughtful poem! Full of imagery. Very well written! The flow is amazing and I loved the rhyme. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:14:51 PM AEST
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"The road to nowhere has an end,
you'll find it where the road slightly bends! "
I loved the ending. A beautiful, inspiring poem, one to be read many times.
Kie
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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Loved this, Shari..the analogy is great....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:15:59 PM AEST
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Great Poem. I liked it alot. I'm going to agree with Kie on that the line "The road to nowhere has an end,
you'll find it where the road slightly bends!"
it's really good, I like that line alot.
~Brittany~
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:16:26 AM AEST
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loved this one.very good analogy..it is good and hopefull.."makes you all more stronger & wise, getting through the journey is your prize."
venkat |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:49:55 PM AEST
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| Christina, what a wonderful prose put into words, the road is still to travel and the journey goes on and on, take care Val |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:18:16 AM AEST
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| Good write. I can understand this one rather well. Nicely done. |
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Re: The Road to Nowhere!
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 02:46:36 AM AEST
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Feeling the same myself.
What a beautiful flowing piece...
Awesome. |
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