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Freefalling Imagination
Contributed by
AbstractMinded
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Is this the line for eternal life?
I need to be sure before I blow my time.
Exact in a scream of indifference
Links to another more reliable truth.
Is that what you want?
Tell me your fears and repurcussions
Say-It doesnt matter
In the face of toying anger.
Image of you in a handshake
Take me far from here.
To where the leaves fall like monotones
You look back, you envy me.
Eighties sidekicks, line the back edge.
Listless, a disgrace to the time.
Used and left, breadth from sanity
They all turned out so tired and forlorn.
Time on a t-shirt.
How could you understand?
This cry in the twilight
When the gathering storm prepares to blow you away.
Line up for the shove.
He had a waltzing beauty
Careering round the trapping edge
Here we are at the inquisition
We'll feel the stick of opium coppulation.
Yes, it is I. Coming for us.
Can you really plunge for me?
Lean before you land.
Magnum opus of a freefall
We always planned to leave you here.
How do you now feel.
Yes I'll fly-in your path.
The labyrinth of woe
Royal drama in a plastic state.
Is this tried or is it a revelation?
When we turn from your drowning cry
Copyright ©
AbstractMinded
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2004-01-27 14:27:42]
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Re: Freefalling Imagination
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:46:17 PM AEST
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| Good job! keep the poems coming! |
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Re: Freefalling Imagination
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:51:13 PM AEST
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Wow what a poem, the one like I used to relate to when I was at secondary school. The title is really appropriate! Jumbled toughts that make some sense in a way or in another. I really loved reading this one! You have great skill! Great write
Anne :D |
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Re: Freefalling Imagination
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 08:21:02 AM AEST
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