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meet on the border
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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meet me on the border
where the sunshine leaves the rain
way far beyond tears innerstate
right to happy left past pain,
1000 miles north towards forever
then turn the curve at you and me
on westward towards contentment
but dont stop at complacency,
fly on left to breath of someday
go where all dreams meet reality
not far as the beach shores of ennui
its right by crystal morning dew,
just follow the roads up to wistful
that happy peaceful woodsy place
then take the exchange by the river
don't turn at rat and race,
on up soul rainbow, down on to rest
follow along romance highway its the best
then cross the bridge over why oh why
along the heartway to passions sky,
travel through the ocean of wishes
entering the tunnel of sweet smelling rose
turn hard left at the meadow of lonely
go straight through to beautiful blue,
meet me on the border at cuddles
on the corner of me and you.
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Re: meet on the border
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:10:36 PM AEST
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| Oh my, I think this is my absolute favorite by you now! Flawless & perfect! Kie |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:13:08 PM AEST
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awwwww....that was just the sweetest damn thing :o) I loved it! Very imaginative writing ((nessa))
Roses
Larry |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:19:36 PM AEST
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FLAWLESSSSSsssssssss!!!!!!! Wow I loved this poem!!!!! Beautiful! So peaceful! WOw and Romantic! Wowowow!! AMAZING!
Anne :D |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:45:51 PM AEST
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| i really liked this one. |
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Re: meet on the border
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:58:24 PM AEST
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I like this poem, I Really like this line "where the sunshine leaves the rain
way far beyond tears innerstate". Good Work.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: meet on the border
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by norm on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:49:17 PM AEST
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Cute as a button..plus brainy
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It's nice to have direction,
In all the things we do,
Then we could have each other,
And live life two by two.
Go straight ahead, my lover,
No turns from here to there,
And round our waists, we'll hover
An arms-encircling pair.
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Re: meet on the border
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:53:46 PM AEST
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wonderful wonderful this has to be the most clever love poem i have read in forever bravo nessa
michelle |
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Re: meet on the border
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:06:36 AM AEST
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| Aaaah.. this is most sublime..flawless and absolutely beautiful...nice..very nice..venkat |
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Re: meet on the border
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:46:20 AM AEST
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perfectly done Nessa I love the way you used the road to discribe this so romantic
michelle |
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Re: meet on the border
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:09:12 AM AEST
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| Totally captivating write ... love your clever use of words Nessa ... this is an awesome poem that had me smiling from the very first line ... I love this so much! ... hugs Jan |
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Re: meet on the border
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:36:31 AM AEST
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| Awwww that was CUTE, I liked it, it made me all warm n' fuzzy!! |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:30:41 AM AEST
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| oh wow, that was sweet (and sweet is definately a word I am not fond of using, lol) great job! |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:36:05 PM AEST
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*Begins packing his bags*
Oh... You didn't mean me... Lol.
Good write. This was rather enjoyable. It was pretty flawless... Very pretty too. |
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Re: meet on the border
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:46:18 PM AEST
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| ladyfawn, you really have outdone yourself again. *S* Cynthia Nice write. |
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