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Escape
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:50:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've fallen once, and that the last.
I've had enough, I want no more of this past.
You had your chance, but lost.
I thought you knew, that hate had a cost.
You can say you're sorry, but that want do.
Because all you've done is left me blue.
I need a man, that can put a smile on my face,
that can never be erased.
A man that will be by myside till the end,
to help me mend.
So I guess this is goodbye to you, and all the pain.
It's time to unchain.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2004-01-27 15:50:06]
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Re: Escape
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:02:48 PM AEST
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| this is very good! keep on going... |
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Re: Escape
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:07:15 PM AEST
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Whao you sound sure of yourself, sorry to hear you've been sad but glad to see you're strong! Great poem! Loved it!! Amazing writeing!! Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Escape
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:30:45 PM AEST
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You can really feel the sadness, and your strength. Good luck, brilliant poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Escape
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by ian1134 on
Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 11:22:36 AM AEST
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| Very powerful |
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